Ragekaje's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Neon garbage]

Pretty cool!

I like how you took simple phrases that each instrument plays and combined them in a way that is interesting and flows from one section to another.

In terms of composition, the song wants to go somewhere, but kind of stays still. There's a long buildup without an epic conclusion. With music, we're pretty much always telling some kind of story. So, keep in mind that you'll want to hook the listener, and then take them somewhere. Tell them the story you want to tell!

I really like your B section at 0:55, it has a subtle, yet hum-able melody. This is the piece I gravitate towards because it has a melody I can relate to. The first section is just setting the scene. Because the B section has the juicy bit, I would recommend trying to get to that section as fast as possible. My suggestion: 4 measures of drums, then bring all the other instruments in on measure 5 and have them play until measure 8, then jump right to that sweet B section at measure 9. (or measure 10 if measure 9 is a rest) After that, go wherever you want with it, as long as you take the listener somewhere new and interesting. Maybe you do the A section again and use it to build up into an even bigger B section that has the melody playing in two octaves with a bit of harmony for an epic conclusion. Or, perhaps you introduce a C section that has an entirely new tone, like you're trying to tell the listener something impactful. The canvas is yours!

All in all, its catchy, but feels unfinished. Keep plugging away at it! Try something. Don't be afraid to experiment. Be brave! You have talent!
Its not garbage, its a start! :) Let me know when you flesh out the idea! I'd love to hear it!

a-BomBa responds:

Thanks for the feedback... condescending as it was.

[Ofekdr85 - Journey]

Interesting!

With my best guess, I would call it chill-classical... but I'm really not sure. I find that some of my own stuff falls into that awkward space between several musical genres, but I think that's what makes them unique!

It is a little bit repetitive, so I would almost say it could fit as a loop in a game. All it needs is just one more section that carried a different variation on the melody, rhythm, or instrumentation. It needs a section that sounds like a turn of events, or like something has definitely changed. With music, we are telling story, sometimes without words. We try convey imagery and emotion through audio alone. In this instance, there isn't much that strays from where we started, so it doesn't feel like the listener was taken anywhere. Typically, we want to start somewhere, go somewhere else, and then either return home to where we started, or leave the listener in a new place entirely. Therefore, I think this tune could benefit from a section that feels drastically different from the rest, while maintaining just enough similarity that it feels like it belongs in the same song.

I do like the variations on the melody as the song progresses; they slowly evolve into something a little darker and more solemn. This prepares the listener for that turn of events that I mentioned.

The strings in the background combined with the drums, give it a spacious, chill vibe. (somewhat reminds me of Metroid) However, the piano clashes with this vibe as it drives the melody a little too often. If you were to have the piano play a little less often so that its more like a spice that's sprinkled on, it would add to that sense of ambiance. This will make it feel like there is more space, like things are slightly more barren. In contrast, if you wanted to lean into the melody, I would suggest picking a point in the song, upping the complexity of the underlying chords, switch up the melody a bit, and add to the busyness of the drums to really intensify things for that one section.

The mix is good, but a bit quiet. I can hear all the instruments playing, but overall the volume level is really low. There's no need to blast it out of the speakers, but definitely turn up the overall volume of the mix so it has a similar level to other similar tracks.

Good job, though! Keep making more music and keep experimenting and learning! I want to hear what you come up with next! :)

ofekdr85 responds:

Thank you very much! I will try next time to make more changes in my tracks, and will try to not mix instruments that don't go well together.

[Android Funk]

Very Cool!
Kicks off to an awesome start right away! For me, its reminiscent of some of the boss battle music from Castle Crashers, as well as Pokemon, and even some MegaMan mixed in there as well.

The mix is pretty good! There are many voices (instruments) playing at any given time and it is always a challenge to make them shine through the sonic spectrum where their sweet spots are. I am having a little trouble making out things in the mid-range between the bass and the lead melody, though. Also, I would recommend boosting the overall volume of the quiet section at 3:05. I have found that listening to my tracks with some white noise in the room (i.e. a fan or an a/c unit) helps me discover when my track has too drastic of a volume change. We don't want our listener's to think our song faded out when its not over yet!

In terms of composition, (and maybe this is about the mix, too) the melody that plays during the first section tends to get drowned out. I think its an awesome melody that drives that section perfectly with the rhythms that you have going on. My advice is to boost that baby! I wanna hear that melody like a vocal for a pop song, I want that stuff ringing back and forth in my head when I'm trying to sleep at night! Hahaha! Seriously, though, boosting that melody would really help to keep me humming that tune when I leave my computer. If it feels to repetitive, you could try an octave jump to keep the sound fresh while still pumping out that melody.

Overall, I think its awesome! It certainly sounds better than anything I have ever done, so take my advice with a grain of salt! :P

I'm interested to know what software you used, sound sets, synths, plugins, etc.

Poosac responds:

I used fl studio and I made all of my presets in Massive except for the main motive thingy and for the last melody, for those 2 I used the plugin Sakura and for sounds ... I really dunno I have libraries full of different sounds.

thanks for your awesome review ~3~

[Concept and Morality]

Interesting!

I like the sound of the synths you used. There's a nice balance in the mix, each part comes in clearly, and there are no harsh tones.

If this is just a demo, like a prototype, I am interested to see how you manage to use the new instrumentation to smooth out the transitions. Guitars and drums will definitely give this a completely different feeling. The transition at 0:39 is very abrupt and jarring. This could be fixed with clever instrumentation, though. Plus, the loop from the end to the beginning is abrupt as well. While it matches in intensity, the rhythms supporting the melodies are strikingly different. That said, I really like the growing intensity throughout the entirety of the song.

Are you planning on using acoustic guitars, clean electric guitars, overdriven guitars, some combination of those? I am very curious.

Even though it is a rough sketch for a loop with great melodies and supportive rhythms, but I would recommend working on the transitions. Looping music needs to have smooth transitions, otherwise it is constantly slapping the listener to get their attention. However, that all depends on what the music is made for.

Great demo! Keep at it! I want to hear the final product and how you envisioned it!

ConceptSama responds:

im actually creating a full song and im gonna play the song live with my guitar i play electric guitar thats how i came up with the ideas i played them first then put them into the computer. im no drum expert but i used a basic beat to keep time in the changed time signature
i just loop it when its not finished
and i shall work on la transitions thats some thing i have trouble programing into a computer
thank you i really appreciate all the feedback

[Waiting for a miracle]

Jammin'!

I am not hugely familiar with this genre, specifically, but I have listened to my fair share of electronica. Your mix is fantastic! The bass is blasting out my speaker and the percussion is smacking me in the face, all without losing any clarity in your synths! I listened closely a couple times and here is what I noticed:

My main concern is a composition issue. Your track is dominated by a major scale and this upbeat tone. I was expecting a shift into a minor key at some point. Somewhere towards the end of the softer section at 1:00 would have been a great place for it. If there was a sadder melody playing in the section before the snare build, (maybe around 1:30) it would make that crescendo at 2:10 feel even more powerful! The lack of a tonal shift also presents us with a storytelling dilemma. Your song tells a story of waiting for this miracle in the most upbeat fashion, never losing hope, never faltering. I would relate more to the song if the melodies started to sound sadder, as if they were about to give up. One sad melody would make the happier ones sound even more joyous!

Another thing that sits a little off with me is the piano (possibly a different instrument) that starts at 0:37. The short sustain on the piano clashes with the kick and snare that are still driving that awesome beat. I recommend replacing it with a different instrument for the section at 0:37 and also at 3:24. Make sure the replacement is more intense than the piano, but less so than the synths that drive the song. However, I would leave the piano in at the section at 1:00 because it fits the tone that section.

Regardless of my complaints, I am still jamming out as I type. This is a fantastic piece, keep up the awesome work!

Demonic-Overmind responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.

Actually, I suck at writing melodies with specific mood, but I'm practicing to get it right. The minor key-shifting would've been awesome, I didn't think of it :P

Those bells, I don't think they're actually clashing because I EQ'd them properly. but yes, I did over-compress this track while mastering so they're sounding like that(maybe).

[A village's call to arms]

This evokes some imagery!

I really like your composition, instrumentation, and the mix. It definitely conveys the scene you were picturing. I could easily imagine a village going about its normal routine and then someone spots armed forces over the hill in the distance. They alert the village, and the men proceed to take up arms. This song could easily be placed in a short cinematic telling that story. There are many awesome things you did to paint that picture, but there were a few things that work against that goal.

Your choice of instruments really helps convey the humble scenery in the village. The small number of instruments help paint the settlement as a tight-knit community, rather than a bustling city. The slow addition of percussion and horns builds the song from a calm, simple day to a tense situation. I do, however, have complaints about the composition.

The fight seems very abrupt. The tension conveyed in the battle seems to leave quicker than it came. After all, if the song is about the battle, the battle should be the majority of the track. (instead, because the battle is only 1/5 of the song, it feels like the song is about the village that experiences raids on a daily basis) I recommend having a few measures of great intensity or very low energy during the fight. This would help paint the battle as brutal and chaotic, or sorrowful and dark, respectively. As for the transitions, there is a nice flow between each section of the song, except for the transition between "C" and "A." (between the battle and the resolution) With the transition happening as fast as it does, this paints the picture of a town immediately going back to its business after fending off raiders. There should be a measure or two of near-silence, perhaps just one stringed instrument playing the main melody at half-time and with a bit more sadness. Then, slowly bring the instruments back to the main theme, but with a certain sorrow, as if the village had lost some of its people.

Do not be mistaken. This song is great! I really enjoyed it! It stirred my memories of Final Fantasy 7 and other fantasy RPG's. Keep up the great work and never give up!

EagleGuard responds:

Hi there Ragekaje,

Thank you very much for writing that in-depth review! Fully agree with you on all points of criticism, and it's definitely something I will keep in mind for future compositions. Musical form can still be a bit tricky for me at times, but adding some more sections would probably have benefitted the song, I agree.

Thanks again for taking your time to write such a expansive review, and I'm glad you liked the piece overall!

[Apocalypse - Shx Dubstep]

I like the composition! It has a strong build into a crescendo, and then rides that energy level for the rest of the duration. The oscillations are strong but do not drown out the quieter instruments playing in the background. My complaints are that it is not long enough, and there's a distinct gap in the lower part frequency spectrum. I really wanted to hear it go on for a little longer, perhaps to have another, but slightly different, quiet part and build back into the crescendo again. As for the frequency gap, I need a little more bass. When I say bass, I'm talking about the frequencies between about 100 hz and 400 hz. (my ears are not great in that regard and I don't have an equalizer to play with the song.) I would recommend looking at your frequency outputs in post, and make sure there are no drastic dips in any range. Watching the Bars visualizer, your song seemed a little lacking in the mid-range. Try to make sure its fairly balanced between 20 hz and 20 khz. This helps the song sound full on any set of speakers, as each set of speakers emphasizes certain ranges.

It does sound better than any Dubstep I could attempt! Keep up the good work! Don't give up!

RFetra responds:

Thank You :D Yeah i will continue the project, i'm trying to make something good to ear and it's hard but i'll keep it , thank you ;)

[Verses of Inner Sectors]

Crazy insanely awesome! Never give up what you're doing, because you are GOOD at it! 5 stars all the way!

VoicesOfNebula responds:

Oh wow, thanks!

Got to say, I love these reviews. They make me push out some more tunes on the way, so I highly appreciate it. So thanks, yet again!