I like the composition! It has a strong build into a crescendo, and then rides that energy level for the rest of the duration. The oscillations are strong but do not drown out the quieter instruments playing in the background. My complaints are that it is not long enough, and there's a distinct gap in the lower part frequency spectrum. I really wanted to hear it go on for a little longer, perhaps to have another, but slightly different, quiet part and build back into the crescendo again. As for the frequency gap, I need a little more bass. When I say bass, I'm talking about the frequencies between about 100 hz and 400 hz. (my ears are not great in that regard and I don't have an equalizer to play with the song.) I would recommend looking at your frequency outputs in post, and make sure there are no drastic dips in any range. Watching the Bars visualizer, your song seemed a little lacking in the mid-range. Try to make sure its fairly balanced between 20 hz and 20 khz. This helps the song sound full on any set of speakers, as each set of speakers emphasizes certain ranges.
It does sound better than any Dubstep I could attempt! Keep up the good work! Don't give up!